: just a blurb....



xxpinballxx
11-08-06, 12:10 PM
Woke up early and the sun was shinin'
Lil' bit cold but I didn't mind it.
Pull out the deville and grab the hose.
GOnna shine my ride like nobody knows.

After washing the ride and cleanin my wheels
its obvious to all what the deal is
With ownin a caddy and rollin it hard.
thinking our cars sets us apart.

down at the park people doin what they do
Five mile an hour I just cruise through
Turning heads and droppin jaws
Looking this good should be breakin laws.

They just can't understand the deep down feelin
that keeps the guys jealous and the ladies reelin
As we open the door and step out our ride
Its love its joy its a feeling of Pride.

Rey Rey 650
11-08-06, 12:14 PM
Nice poem mang

xxpinballxx
11-08-06, 01:13 PM
yeah just thought i'd pencil somethin down about driving a caddy.

LittleB
11-08-06, 01:22 PM
I like it! Very nice :D

Florian
11-08-06, 03:02 PM
you said "grab the hose"......lol


F

xxpinballxx
11-08-06, 05:01 PM
HAHA! When I wrote that i thought the exact same thing F.

JRau
11-08-06, 08:30 PM
Pretty cool poem. Send it in to Reader's Digest or something--you could win some $$.

JRau in central Iowa

dp102288
11-09-06, 09:52 AM
Out of 16 lines, F reads the last half of one! :histeric:

xxpinballxx
11-10-06, 10:55 AM
Readers digest.....I have had so so much in those when I was younger. My mom sent everything I wrote to them. I rarely try getting anything published unless it relates to alot of people and is truly a new way of thinking of something.
I have had a couple dozen things published!

Florian
11-10-06, 11:19 AM
Out of 16 lines, F reads the last half of one! :histeric:

If theres a smut angle, Im on it.


F

Spyder
11-10-06, 03:17 PM
Hehehe...you said you're on it.

Huh, maybe I need to practice. :D

Stoneage_Caddy
11-10-06, 06:10 PM
I scream "whoever designed this is an ass"
As I lay in a pool of gas.
My right arm begins to burn
As I tell myself that bolt just needs one more turn.
Blood sweat and tears
The tank falls out confirming my fears
The damn fuel pump took my money
Now I cant afford no date with a fly honey
I light another Ciggie
Gas fumes aint no biggie
If this is what owning a caddy is about
Id rather have the gout

eldorado99
11-10-06, 11:01 PM
I scream "whoever designed this is an ass"
As I lay in a pool of gas.
My right arm begins to burn
As I tell myself that bolt just needs one more turn.
Blood sweat and tears
The tank falls out confirming my fears
The damn fuel pump took my money
Now I cant afford no date with a fly honey
I light another Ciggie
Gas fumes aint no biggie
If this is what owning a caddy is about
Id rather have the gout
Hahahaha.... did you write that?

Stoneage_Caddy
11-10-06, 11:28 PM
yup

I am the schlep

eldorado99
11-10-06, 11:58 PM
Lol well it's pretty clever!

dp102288
11-12-06, 11:37 AM
I scream "whoever designed this is an ass"
As I lay in a pool of gas.
My right arm begins to burn
As I tell myself that bolt just needs one more turn.
Blood sweat and tears
The tank falls out confirming my fears
The damn fuel pump took my money
Now I cant afford no date with a fly honey
I light another Ciggie
Gas fumes aint no biggie
If this is what owning a caddy is about
Id rather have the gout

Excellent post!! But, gout does suck to have (the pain is horrible!!!)

I still think Tom has one over you though. :D